Some Developed Story Idea's

Ok so here i have scanned in two story ideas which have a plot on the left hand side and then a very rough storyboard on the right.

 In this story there is a man with a really fat head staggering along the street. His head is making him unbalanced and when he finally gets it under control the fat drops to his belly. He doesnt mind this so much because it is a lot easier to manoeuvre. But things get worse for him as the fat move down to his foot and he cant move, he tries so hard to move his foot but cant. In the end he just sits down and gives up. The plot could go on so that the fat move around his body some more.

This story is set at my desk. All is quiet and still but then blu tack comes off my posters and starts to gather in the middle of my desk. Its forms the shape of a man, once complete the man looks himself up and down and is pleased with what he see's. But then out of the corner of his eye he see's a huge blob of blu tack coming towards him. Soon he realises its coming to attach itself onto him, so he makes a run for it. They run around the desk for a bit but sooner or later the blob catches him and moulds itself into him. The end shot would be a really obese man looking really sad.